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The diagram illustrates the figure for three major reasons for land degradation in four different regions globally. Overall, deforestation and breeding are the most popular causes of land damage around the world.

The two largest areas of land that are damaged by tree-cutting, over-grazing and agricultural activities are Asia and Africa with approximately 1180 and 1260 million hectares each. Meanwhile, Australia and Europe are considerably lower, nearly 300 and 400 million respectively.

It can be seen easily that, breeding is the main leading cause of land degradation in Africa, Europe and Australia, especially breading in Africa is twice as many million hectares as in Australia. Next, these regions also have the lowest areas of land damaged by farming with 300 million, below 100 million and nearly 50 million hectares respectively. Moreover, Australia and Europe have the same amount of land, which is degraded by deforestation with 100 million hectares.

In Asia, tree cutting is the most common reason for land loss with 450 million hectares, following by farming with 420 million hectares, then breeding with 380 million hectares.