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Francesko Posted 14 years ago
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Please can someone revise my essay.I'am practicing for my exam on TOEFL iBT.
Some people prefer to spend time with one or two close friends.Others choose to spend time with a large number of friends.Compare the advantages of each choice.Which of these two ways of spending time do you prefer?Use specific reasons to support your answer.
These days the society and the friendship are the bases in our life,the way we develop ourselves and create our personality in our circle of friendship.Personally I think that spending time with two close friends is the best way.Because you know how they are and you can trust them and asking them for help on circumstances of this life,on bad or even in good situations.They are there when you need them,when you are down and you need help they raise their hand and giving strength to help you get back up again.They never let you down because they know you do the same about them in an nearly future when they need the same help or advices.Otherwise having a big circle it’s a good thing for some other reasons in this life.For example for an information or something else.They can help.Others think that having a large number friends it’s a good thing.I don’t think so because nowdays you canno’t believe your own shadow in the dark.In my own experience think that having a large number of friends that you are with them every single day it will not bring a good thing but only will cause problems in myriad ways.And this circle depends how they are or how their personality is created and on the matter of fact they will influence me on both ways.Because you can’t have all of them on your list as your bestfriends or closed friends.Life isn’t a movies,life isn’t a party to have large number of friends and to make fun all the time.Life is a war and two close friends is the best choice and a good circle around you for a little favor.So as I stated my reasons above I think that the best is to have two close friends.
Some people prefer to spend time with one or two close friends.Others choose to spend time with a large number of friends.Compare the advantages of each choice.Which of these two ways of spending time do you prefer?Use specific reasons to support your answer.
These days the society and the friendship are the bases in our life,the way we develop ourselves and create our personality in our circle of friendship.Personally I think that spending time with two close friends is the best way.Because you know how they are and you can trust them and asking them for help on circumstances of this life,on bad or even in good situations.They are there when you need them,when you are down and you need help they raise their hand and giving strength to help you get back up again.They never let you down because they know you do the same about them in an nearly future when they need the same help or advices.Otherwise having a big circle it’s a good thing for some other reasons in this life.For example for an information or something else.They can help.Others think that having a large number friends it’s a good thing.I don’t think so because nowdays you canno’t believe your own shadow in the dark.In my own experience think that having a large number of friends that you are with them every single day it will not bring a good thing but only will cause problems in myriad ways.And this circle depends how they are or how their personality is created and on the matter of fact they will influence me on both ways.Because you can’t have all of them on your list as your bestfriends or closed friends.Life isn’t a movies,life isn’t a party to have large number of friends and to make fun all the time.Life is a war and two close friends is the best choice and a good circle around you for a little favor.So as I stated my reasons above I think that the best is to have two close friends.
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Hi, You need to organize this into paragraphs, as follows. an introduction a para for each of your main points a conclusion Try again? Clive
- Hi, You need to organize this into paragraphs, as follows.
- an introduction a para for each of your main points a conclusion Try again?
- Clive
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Hi,
You need to organize this into paragraphs, as follows.
an introduction
a para for each of your main points
a conclusion
Try again?
You need to organize this into paragraphs, as follows.
an introduction
a para for each of your main points
a conclusion
Try again?
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