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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
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At present,we, at the Nursing Department have many challenges that we need to do something about it that happen in every hospital in the world includes views and visions, increasing complexity, putting ideas into practice, nursing leadership challenges and many others but espeacially nursing shortage because many staffs depart and some express dissatisfaction with their practices especially clinical nurses. Therefore, the changing composition of the nursing workforce and dissatisfaction of practicing nurses contribute to the complexity of the nursing shortage.
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Hi, Your first sentnce has a lot of problems. You need to split it into two or more sentences. Would you like to try that and repost?
- Hi, Your first sentnce has a lot of problems.
- You need to split it into two or more sentences.
- Would you like to try that and repost?
- Then I'd be happy to comment again.
- Clive
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Hi,
Your first sentnce has a lot of problems. You need to split it into two or more sentences. Would you like to try that and repost?
Then I'd be happy to comment again.
Clive
Your first sentnce has a lot of problems. You need to split it into two or more sentences. Would you like to try that and repost?
Then I'd be happy to comment again.
Clive
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Same idea with Clive, that you should break down your sentence into seperate parts and give us a clear structure of showing what you want to say about the subject. The most effective way to use English is to use simple, clear English.
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