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Seamto Posted 16 years ago
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social problems
nowadays, there is a lot of trouble all over the world then, social problems are one from more issues spread. most people are suffering from social problems. However, there is no problem without solution. we had been hearing everyday in newspapers numerous issues just talking about social trouble.
Therefore, I would now like to comment on the above statement. I believe that the social problems have a great influence on our life style and form many trends such as effecting one's relationship with the society, and the most effected by these problems are children.
Firstly, there are more neighbors in recent days whose friendship between themselves is very weak due to these social problems. For example, when the usual person finishes his work and goes home to get rest and suddenly a boy' neighbor play on music with a loud sound. Now what do you think that a usual person will do? Simply he can't do anything because of he is afraid from make problem with his neighbor. As a result, the social problems increase everyday due to no body can do anything about it.
secondly, we could notes the number of children who are lives their life in suffering. we watch TV and newspapers too much, we become haven,t any emotion forwarded those children who are lost their life because wrong decided from their parents. For instance, when the couple decided leave other and spread, whose will be lost now of course their kids and without doubt the first one charge is their parents because these kids have no future and percentage they will be criminals are large .
In short up, I would like to advise all of parents to be aware about social problem and they have to be careful about their kids future. In addition, we must to try sophisticated society for ourselves and for a nation.
nowadays, there is a lot of trouble all over the world then, social problems are one from more issues spread. most people are suffering from social problems. However, there is no problem without solution. we had been hearing everyday in newspapers numerous issues just talking about social trouble.
Therefore, I would now like to comment on the above statement. I believe that the social problems have a great influence on our life style and form many trends such as effecting one's relationship with the society, and the most effected by these problems are children.
Firstly, there are more neighbors in recent days whose friendship between themselves is very weak due to these social problems. For example, when the usual person finishes his work and goes home to get rest and suddenly a boy' neighbor play on music with a loud sound. Now what do you think that a usual person will do? Simply he can't do anything because of he is afraid from make problem with his neighbor. As a result, the social problems increase everyday due to no body can do anything about it.
secondly, we could notes the number of children who are lives their life in suffering. we watch TV and newspapers too much, we become haven,t any emotion forwarded those children who are lost their life because wrong decided from their parents. For instance, when the couple decided leave other and spread, whose will be lost now of course their kids and without doubt the first one charge is their parents because these kids have no future and percentage they will be criminals are large .
In short up, I would like to advise all of parents to be aware about social problem and they have to be careful about their kids future. In addition, we must to try sophisticated society for ourselves and for a nation.
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Hi seamto; Welcome to the forums! I assume that you want some comments on your essay, and I will give you a few. First, your topic "social problems" is very general, and you talk about much more specific things in your essay.
- Hi seamto; Welcome to the forums!
- I assume that you want some comments on your essay, and I will give you a few.
- First, your topic "social problems" is very general, and you talk about much more specific things in your essay.
- Perhaps a title of "Getting along with each other" would be more descriptive since your examples deal with inter-personal relationships.
- Second, you need to pay attention to capitalization.
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Hi seamto;
Welcome to the forums!
I assume that you want some comments on your essay, and I will give you a few.
First, your topic "social problems" is very general, and you talk about much more specific things in your essay. Perhaps a title of "Getting along with each other" would be more descriptive since your examples deal with inter-personal relationships.
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Welcome to the forums!
I assume that you want some comments on your essay, and I will give you a few.
First, your topic "social problems" is very general, and you talk about much more specific things in your essay. Perhaps a title of "Getting along with each other" would be more descriptive since your examples deal with inter-personal relationships.
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