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SILAS MARNER:
George Eliot portrayed Silas Marner as a kind-hearted man with strong faith, though odd apparition. Marner was a weaver in Lantern Yard and a member of The Brotherhood. He lost respectability as a result of a theft. Consequently, the excommunication was inevitable, though, to wrongful accusation. He did not defy to the resolution of religious community, moreover he expected that god would clear him of his guilt. Guilty or not, Silas did not show any volition to stand up for himself. Is it appropriate to make a stand after the excommunication?
Furthermore, Silas had various options, he could stay and repent for the crime he did not commit and somehow raise the money. I think, that is out of the question, since why, should anyone bear the blame if the guilt was not proven to him. In this particular case they did have some evidence about the crime which burdened Silas, but still they should not have hasted so. In all due fairness the thought of a set up, occurred to none besides Silas. Anyhow, the facts, though they were more than obvious were not carefully investigated. For example, the crime scene was not examined. Besides, the forensic science was not developed enough to detect fingerprints or shoe impressions which might have had totally different view on the matter. Not to mention, the main suspect was convicted on the most primitive way by drawing lots. To illustrate how could such trial do injustice to the victim's family if the serial killer would be released after such nonsense. People who were related to the deceased would have lost faith in community, administration of justice and also faith in God. That was the way Silas Marner felt after he was condemned.
Moreover, since he was eminent member of the Brotherhood well known for his honesty and loyalty, he could try to persuade other members that he was foisted. This would make him belligerent and active person, thus