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Little Prince 96 Posted 7 years ago
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ESSAY 1-will you help me?

  1. The research says many key cities in Southeast Asia are negatively affected by pollution from single-use plastic and marine plastic debris. What is your solution to this issue? (250 Words) *

I totally agree with the research. Because I am one of the citizens living in one of these key cities that negatively affected by pollution from single-use plastic and marine plastic debris. Where I come from is Hanoi city. This city is getting many consequences of pollution’s problem. Typically is water pollution. People throw plastic, bottles, bags, rubbish into rivers and lakes. That’s the reason why organisms living underwater are deading. People living in this area do not have fresh-air. It’s affected directly to their daily lives.

Reducing and completely replaced single-use plastic and marine plastic debris is really important more than other to build a sustainable city in the future.

So we need to launch many big campaigns with long term goals. It will help us deliver the key messages to the audience we want to target and encourage them to take actions to change their life. Maybe single actions are not enough to address plastic pollution but a series of actions like plastic recycling, saying no to single plastic use and seeking alternative energy solutions can help.

And one more thing we should call everyone using products made from organic materials and similar to natural. It’s very popular in many grocery store, coffee store in many big cities in Vietnam now.

To wrap up. Only me may not do this but us can make it becomes possible if we join hand in big projects to viral positive impacts.

  

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You wrote less than 250 words. In IELTS Task 2, this mistake would lower your score. If the instructions ask for 250 words, you should strive to write between 260 and 290.

  • You wrote less than 250 words.
  • In IELTS Task 2, this mistake would lower your score.
  • If the instructions ask for 250 words, you should strive to write between 260 and 290.
  • I totally agree with the research.
  • Because I am one of the citizens living in one of these key cities that negatively affected by pollution from single-use plastic and marine plastic debris.
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You wrote less than 250 words. In IELTS Task 2, this mistake would lower your score. If the instructions ask for 250 words, you should strive to write between 260 and 290.


I totally agree with the research. Because I am one of the citizens living in one of these key cities that negatively affected by pollution from single-use plastic and marine plastic debris. (That is not

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