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Ellisa Posted 17 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Errors want to be corrected! :D
Hello teachers~
I have a part of my essay here, with lots of grammar mistakes as well as not clear sentences!
I'd appreciate it if you could help me with these.
Thanks in advance!
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In terms of autonomy, Keating has shown an ideal teacher in the movie, Dead Poets Society. Keating made students think themselves without any boundaries, which seems ridiculous in our situation. People say that Korean schools are failing to teach crucial skills such as creative thinking. Looking back to my high school days, it was even strange if teacher doesn't have class with designated book. Only when the class was related to the exam, we were relieved. As I know that there is no way but reforming the educational system, I just envy where this autonomy principle can be realized.
I have a part of my essay here, with lots of grammar mistakes as well as not clear sentences!
I'd appreciate it if you could help me with these.
Thanks in advance!
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In terms of autonomy, Keating has shown an ideal teacher in the movie, Dead Poets Society. Keating made students think themselves without any boundaries, which seems ridiculous in our situation. People say that Korean schools are failing to teach crucial skills such as creative thinking. Looking back to my high school days, it was even strange if teacher doesn't have class with designated book. Only when the class was related to the exam, we were relieved. As I know that there is no way but reforming the educational system, I just envy where this autonomy principle can be realized.
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Ellisa In terms of autonomy, Keating has shown showed herself to be an ideal teacher in the movie Dead Poets Society. Keating made students think for themselves without any boundaries, which seems ridiculous in our situation. People say that Korean schools are failing to teach crucial skills such as creative thinking.
- Ellisa In terms of autonomy, Keating has shown showed herself to be an ideal teacher in the movie Dead Poets Society.
- Keating made students think for themselves without any boundaries, which seems ridiculous in our situation.
- People say that Korean schools are failing to teach crucial skills such as creative thinking.
- Looking back to my high school days, it was even strange if a teacher doesn't didn't teach have class with the designated book.
- Only when the class was related to the exam, we were relieved.
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EllisaIn terms of autonomy, Keatinghas shownshowed herself to be an ideal teacher in the movie Dead Poets Society. Keating made students think for themselves without any boundaries, which seems ridiculous in our situation. People say that Korean schools are failing to teach crucial skills such as creative thinking. Looking back to my high school days, it was
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