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Geek Omar Posted 14 years ago
Grammar
Errors in "Give Your Windows a Fresh New Look with CutsoPacks"
Hi,
I'd like to someone to point out the all the grammatical/vocabulary errors (if any) in the following sentence.
"Give Your Windows a Fresh New Look with CutsoPacks"
*CustoPacks are themes for Microsoft Windows.
Thank you
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I'd like to someone to point out the all the grammatical/vocabulary errors (if any) in the following sentence.
"Give Your Windows a Fresh New Look with CutsoPacks"
*CustoPacks are themes for Microsoft Windows.
Thank you
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Top answer
There are capitalization errors in your sentence. It should read: Give your Windows a fresh new look with CutsoPacks. However, when you say "your Windows", many people might think you are talking about the windows in your home or your office.
- There are capitalization errors in your sentence.
- It should read: Give your Windows a fresh new look with CutsoPacks.
- However, when you say "your Windows", many people might think you are talking about the windows in your home or your office.
- Try to make it clear that you are talking about Microsoft's operating system.
- How about saying: Give your copy of Windows a fresh new look with CutsoPacks.
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There are capitalization errors in your sentence.
It should read: Give your Windows a fresh new look with CutsoPacks.
However, when you say "your Windows", many people might think you are talking about the windows in your home or your office. Try to make it clear that you are talking about Microsoft's operating system.
How about saying:
Give your copy of Windows
It should read: Give your Windows a fresh new look with CutsoPacks.
However, when you say "your Windows", many people might think you are talking about the windows in your home or your office. Try to make it clear that you are talking about Microsoft's operating system.
How about saying:
Give your copy of Windows
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I think I haven't made my self clear in the first post. This is an article title in a computer help site. So each word should e capitalized. Regarding "your Windows" the readers will understand it's about MS Windows not the windows in their home or office.
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Hello Geek,
You're correct. It wasn't clear.
Because your sentence is a title, capitalization makes all the difference. Yes, every word, except articles and prepositions, should be capitalized.
My point about "your Windows" was that even though your advertisement is in a "computer help site", and obviously people will know it's about MS Windows, it still looks odd unless
You're correct. It wasn't clear.
Because your sentence is a title, capitalization makes all the difference. Yes, every word, except articles and prepositions, should be capitalized.
My point about "your Windows" was that even though your advertisement is in a "computer help site", and obviously people will know it's about MS Windows, it still looks odd unless
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Well CustoPacks is a free product so you can keep the smile. One of the sites rules is that you omit
the Windows version entirely if the product works for all the versions the same way.
the Windows version entirely if the product works for all the versions the same way.
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Yes, well you're welcome for the help and I look forward to seeing your product somewhere soon.
Good luck
Good luck
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