0
Habibaelgindy Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

errors?

I hate myself when I tweet something then delete it right after but then I realize that someone replied to that tweet.
  

Top answer

”

— Wilpeter

  • ”
Free · every Monday

Get the Weekly English Kit 📬

New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.

3 Answers
0
Suggestion: “I hate myself when I tweet something and quickly delete it, only to realize later that someone had replied to that tweet.”
0
0
wilpeterSuggestion: “I hate myself when I tweet something and quickly delete it, only to realize later that someone had replied to that tweet.”
Does that mean, mine is correct?
0
0
habibaelgindyDoes that mean, mine is correct?
No. It is a run-on sentence without punctuation. I suggested a shorter version that says the same. Here is your version with punctuation:
"I hate myself when I tweet something. Then, after I delete it right away, I realize that someone replied to that tweet."
0

Related Questions