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Masanori Takaoka Posted 11 years ago
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Could you correct the following sentences so they sound more natural?

1 Opinions about how to educate children about money vary from person to person.
2 Opinions of how to teach children about finance vary from one person to another.
3 People have different opinions on the way of teaching children how to use money.
4 Ideas about how you should teach children about money differ from person to person.
5 There are various opinions about ways to teach children about money.
6 Opinions how we should educate children about money are different in each person.
7 It varies from person to person how we should educate children about money.
  

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In my opinion, there isn't a right or wrong usage. However, when "about" is already being included in the sentence, "Opinions ON seems better". " #7 is OK in my opinion.

— Wilpeter

  • In my opinion, there isn't a right or wrong usage.
  • However, when "about" is already being included in the sentence, "Opinions ON seems better".
  • " #7 is OK in my opinion.
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In my opinion, there isn't a right or wrong usage. However, when "about" is already being included in the sentence, "Opinions ON seems better".
#1 through 5 - I would use "on"
#6 "Opinions how we should educate children about money differ with each person."
#7 is OK in my opinion.
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