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Alia Posted 18 years ago
Letter Writing

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1b01font00Hello to everybody,02font02b02br
01b01font00I find this site very helpful and I used some tips and coments on other posts before writing my own motivation letter to university. 02font02b02br
01b01font00I'm not native english speaker, so can I ask your help in correcting this letter (words, grammar) or if something isn't really convenient to write, please comment.02font02b02br
01b01font00Thank you in advance, 02br
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01b01font00Here is letter:02font02b02br
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00Dear Sir/Madam,02br
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00I would like to express my interest for admission to a master program Cultural Economics and Cultural Entrepreneurship within *** 00. 02br
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00I have completed four years of undergraduate studies in Tourism and Hospitality management and after graduating I was certain that I want to undertake a postgraduate study. During studies I became very interested in the culture and its affect to tourism and sustainable development of economics. My graduation paper was related to renovation of cultural architectural objects and its impact for surrounding territory and economics where I reviewed the problem of cultural heritage in 00 and came to conclusion that culture can create the balance between material world and society. 01b01font00(f02font01font00or me it seems unfinished here, but I was not able to make a "bridge")02font02b02br
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00Regarding my career aspirations working in cultural industries and becoming a manager of cultural organization I want to obtain Master's degree in cultural entrepreneurship. This knowledge will allow me to understand specific management principles what is needed in creative industries and I will be able to fully realize my professional goals. 02br
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00I am confident that I have the necessary combination of self-motivation, background, personality and academic knowledge to succeed in the Master’s degree program. I hope that my experience at 00 will equip me to manage my future well and also prepare me to make significant contributions to the development of my country.02br
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00Yours faithfully,02br
00Name Surname0-
  

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0 01table 01tr 01td 02td 01td 02br 02br 0026TMNTJG2PG 05000 #510315 Tue, 06 May 08 12:16 PM 02br 02br 02br 02br 02td 02tr 02table 00It is complete here. Earlier version is the result of an accidental click of the 'Post' button. 02br 02br 02br 00Dear Sir/Madam,02br 02br 02br 00I would like to express my interest for admission to a master program Cultural Economics and Cultural Entrepreneurship within *** university.

  • 0 01table 01tr 01td 02td 01td 02br 02br 0026TMNTJG2PG 05000 #510315 Tue, 06 May 08 12:16 PM 02br 02br 02br 02br 02td 02tr 02table 00It is complete here.
  • Earlier version is the result of an accidental click of the 'Post' button.
  • 02br 02br 02br 00Dear Sir/Madam,02br 02br 02br 00I would like to express my interest for admission to a master program Cultural Economics and Cultural Entrepreneurship within *** university.
  • 02br 02br 00I have completed four years of undergraduate studies in Tourism and Hospitality management and after graduating I have become certain that I want to undertake a postgraduate study.
  • During studies I became very interested in the culture and its effect on tourism and sustainable development of economics.
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