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Alia Posted 18 years ago
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1 b 01 font 00 Hello to everybody, 02 font 02 b 02 br
01 b 01 font 00 I find this site very helpful and I used some tips and coments on other posts before writing my own motivation letter to university. 02 font 02 b 02 br
01 b 01 font 00 I'm not native english speaker, so can I ask your help in correcting this letter (words, grammar) or if something isn't really convenient to write, please comment. 02 font 02 b 02 br
01 b 01 font 00 Thank you in advance, 02 br
02 font 02 b 02 br
01 b 01 font 00 Here is letter: 02 font 02 b 02 br
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00 Dear Sir/Madam, 02 br
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00 I would like to express my interest for admission to a master program Cultural Economics and Cultural Entrepreneurship within *** 00 . 02 br
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00 I have completed four years of undergraduate studies in Tourism and Hospitality management and after graduating I was certain that I want to undertake a postgraduate study. During studies I became very interested in the culture and its affect to tourism and sustainable development of economics. My graduation paper was related to renovation of cultural architectural objects and its impact for surrounding territory and economics where I reviewed the problem of cultural heritage in 00 and came to conclusion that culture can create the balance between material world and society. 01 b 01 font 00 (f 02 font 01 font 00 or me it seems unfinished here, but I was not able to make a "bridge") 02 font 02 b 02 br
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00 Regarding my career aspirations working in cultural industries and becoming a manager of cultural organization I want to obtain Master's degree in cultural entrepreneurship. This knowledge will allow me to understand specific management principles what is needed in creative industries and I will be able to fully realize my professional goals. 02 br
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00 I am confident that I have the necessary combination of self-motivation, background, personality and academic knowledge to succeed in the Master’s degree program. I hope that my experience at 00 will equip me to manage my future well and also prepare me to make significant contributions to the development of my country. 02 br
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00 Yours faithfully, 02 br
00 Name Surname 0-
01 b 01 font 00 I find this site very helpful and I used some tips and coments on other posts before writing my own motivation letter to university. 02 font 02 b 02 br
01 b 01 font 00 I'm not native english speaker, so can I ask your help in correcting this letter (words, grammar) or if something isn't really convenient to write, please comment. 02 font 02 b 02 br
01 b 01 font 00 Thank you in advance, 02 br
02 font 02 b 02 br
01 b 01 font 00 Here is letter: 02 font 02 b 02 br
02 br
00 Dear Sir/Madam, 02 br
02 br
00 I would like to express my interest for admission to a master program Cultural Economics and Cultural Entrepreneurship within *** 00 . 02 br
02 br
00 I have completed four years of undergraduate studies in Tourism and Hospitality management and after graduating I was certain that I want to undertake a postgraduate study. During studies I became very interested in the culture and its affect to tourism and sustainable development of economics. My graduation paper was related to renovation of cultural architectural objects and its impact for surrounding territory and economics where I reviewed the problem of cultural heritage in 00 and came to conclusion that culture can create the balance between material world and society. 01 b 01 font 00 (f 02 font 01 font 00 or me it seems unfinished here, but I was not able to make a "bridge") 02 font 02 b 02 br
02 br
00 Regarding my career aspirations working in cultural industries and becoming a manager of cultural organization I want to obtain Master's degree in cultural entrepreneurship. This knowledge will allow me to understand specific management principles what is needed in creative industries and I will be able to fully realize my professional goals. 02 br
02 br
00 I am confident that I have the necessary combination of self-motivation, background, personality and academic knowledge to succeed in the Master’s degree program. I hope that my experience at 00 will equip me to manage my future well and also prepare me to make significant contributions to the development of my country. 02 br
02 br
02 br
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00 Yours faithfully, 02 br
00 Name Surname 0-
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0 01 table 01 tr 01 td 02 td 01 td 02 br 02 br 00 26TMNTJG2PG 05 0 00 #510315 Tue, 06 May 08 12:16 PM 02 br 02 br 02 br 02 br 02 td 02 tr 02 table 00 It is complete here. Earlier version is the result of an accidental click of the 'Post' button. 02 br 02 br 02 br 00 Dear Sir/Madam, 02 br 02 br 02 br 00 I would like to express my interest for admission to a master program Cultural Economics and Cultural Entrepreneurship within *** university.
- 0 01 table 01 tr 01 td 02 td 01 td 02 br 02 br 00 26TMNTJG2PG 05 0 00 #510315 Tue, 06 May 08 12:16 PM 02 br 02 br 02 br 02 br 02 td 02 tr 02 table 00 It is complete here.
- Earlier version is the result of an accidental click of the 'Post' button.
- 02 br 02 br 02 br 00 Dear Sir/Madam, 02 br 02 br 02 br 00 I would like to express my interest for admission to a master program Cultural Economics and Cultural Entrepreneurship within *** university.
- 02 br 02 br 00 I have completed four years of undergraduate studies in Tourism and Hospitality management and after graduating I have become certain that I want to undertake a postgraduate study.
- During studies I became very interested in the culture and its effect on tourism and sustainable development of economics.
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