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Some parents may concern about their children's career path, but letting children choose career they like is the best thing, so they don't have high pressure when doing job they don't like.

  

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Some parents may be concerned aboit their children's career path but that shouldn't prevent the latter from making their own decisions. Otherwise, doing a job they don't like could result in feeling pressured.

  • Some parents may be concerned aboit their children's career path but that shouldn't prevent the latter from making their own decisions.
  • Otherwise, doing a job they don't like could result in feeling pressured.
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Some parents may be concerned aboit their children's career path but that shouldn't prevent the latter from making their own decisions. Otherwise, doing a job they don't like could result in feeling pressured.

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