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BW2/3 Posted 20 years ago
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A passenger was standing at the door to wait for the train to stop.

His left hand was gripping the rail and the another hand was holding a baggage.

His eyes, dully, were looking through doors.

Are these sentences OK?

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A passenger was standing at the door waiting for the train to stop. His left hand was gripping the rail and the other hand was holding a piece of baggage. <> His eyes, dully, were looking out the door windows .

— Marius Hancu

  • A passenger was standing at the door waiting for the train to stop.
  • His left hand was gripping the rail and the other hand was holding a piece of baggage.
  • <> His eyes, dully, were looking out the door windows .
  • FYI: -------- dully= in a dull manner : STUPIDLY , SLOWLY , DIMLY , SLUGGISHLY : without life or spirit -----------
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A passenger was standing at the door waiting for the train to stop.

His left hand was gripping the rail and the other hand was holding a piece of baggage.
<>His eyes, dully, were looking out the door windows.

FYI:
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dully
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