Erasmus registration letter grammar help

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Hi,

Can i ask a small grammar correction for my erasmus registration letter to sweden gothenburg?

This is my small letter:

Dear Anita Varga,

I am Ambrus Eszter, i am studying Information Enginering in Sapientia University. The last year i won the erasmus grant and i would like to apply for the university. May i ask your help for my registration to the II. semester? I got your email address from Dr.Kerekes Anna local erasmus coordinator.

Thanks for your help,
I've been watinting for your answer,
Ambrus Eszter

Thanks for yours help.

Mister Micawber · Accepted Answer

Dear Ms Varga,

I am studying Information Enginering at Sapientia University. Last year I won the Erasmus grant, and I would like to apply to the university. May I ask your help in my registration for the second semester? I was given your email address by Dr.Kerekes Anna, our local Erasmus coordinator.

Thank you very much for your time and consideration.

Sincerely yours,

Ambrus Eszter

Macska · Answer

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Erasmus registration letter grammar help

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