Erasmus motivation letter - last draft, Please Help!

i would be very happy if could check this motivation letter, before we post it. (we have to send it by today midnight)

I really appreciate your work! thanks a lot!

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I am writing to apply for the Erasmus Program at the University of XXX in Belgium. It will be in the 4th year of my studies and therefore I believe this is the best opportunity to deepen my knowledge in a multicultural environment.

I have always lived in Hungary, but studying abroad has been always part of my plans. I am a conscientious person, dividing my time between studies, reading and music. I also participated in the student council and through my bilingual high-school I have contacted with people from different countries and backgrounds, thus creating a strong thirst for moving out and get to know other cultures.

The Erasmus program seems like the perfect opportunity to meet other cultures, learn another language, experience other educational system and enrich my curriculum vitae, as well as gain more independence. Belgian culture is, I believe, very different from mine and that is a plus when choosing my destination

The University of XXX is offering a wide range of courses and appears to be the perfect complement to my education, mainly focused on marketing and business studies. It would enable me to develop a strong background of knowledge from a different view than my current studies and that would give a significant plus to my future carreer.

I am confident I would prove to be an enthusiastic and hard working student.

Thank you very much for your interest and consideration.

Looking forward to your reply.