Erasmus letter

Hi there,
could you be so kind and look at my motivation letter for erasmus study programme? Let me know, what do you think about it.

Dear Sir or Madam ,
With this letter, I would like to express my interest in studying at he University or College of ''X'' as an Erasmus student.
I am currently attending the first year of the Visual Communication program in the International School Of Law And Business. I have chosen this specialty because I was interested in this studying program. This specialty gave me an opportunity to express my creativity in many different fields of this study subjects such as photography, direction, acting and organizational activities. Sine I am planning my future with Visual Communication I would be delighted to try other University or College to get in touch with new cultures and educational system. Furthermore, I would like to improve my English language skills.
Before I chose this specialty I had some experience in organization. Although, it was not really big achievement, but I had an opportunity to participate in few events organization in my high school. On of the biggest events was a prom night. I was assigned to do these tasks : to find a place for after party , to set time and to find people who would be able to entertain quests. All this shows my creativity , communication skills and the ability to accomplish a task that was given to me.
I realize the competition for the Erasmus exchange program is though , however , I feel that I have many strengths that make me eligible. My ability to work in a group , to not be afraid to tell the audience my opinion, the fact that I speak English fluently I will be able to communicate with different people and knowing this language will help me to extend
my knowledge in this study program.

I look forward to hearing from you and if you require any further information please do not hesitate to contact me.

Yours faithfully ,
Agne Maciulaityte