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Inchoateknowledge Posted 20 years ago
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The seemingly interminable debate about the Siamese twins and their fate was an inexplicably popular subject even amongst the British media and their seemingly unquenchable thirst for overblown drama.
and links "their seemingly unquenchable thirst for overblown drama" with what?
This sentence is awkward to me.
It should be "the British media with their seemingly ..."
What is your opinion?
and links "their seemingly unquenchable thirst for overblown drama" with what?
This sentence is awkward to me.
It should be "the British media with their seemingly ..."
What is your opinion?
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I agree on both counts.
- I agree on both counts.
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among the media and their thirst.
On second reading I find it acceptable too.
Thanks.
On second reading I find it acceptable too.
Thanks.
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