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Contiluo Posted 14 years ago
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This is my brother, and he is a Scorpio. He is wearing a purple T-shirt, brown shorts, and green boots. He is a washing worker. Also, he just graduated from high school, but he doesn’t want to enter university.
This is my brother, and he is a Scorpio. He is wearing a purple T-shirt, brown shorts, and green boots. He is a washing worker. Also, he just graduated from high school, but he doesn’t want to enter university.
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Hi, This is my brother, and he is a Scorpio. He is wearing a purple T-shirt, brown shorts, and green boots. He is a washing worker.
- Hi, This is my brother, and he is a Scorpio.
- He is wearing a purple T-shirt, brown shorts, and green boots.
- He is a washing worker.
- Also, he just graduated from high school, but he doesn’t want to enter university.
- 'Washing worker' is not idiomatic.
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Hi,
This is my brother, and he is a Scorpio. He is wearing a purple T-shirt, brown shorts, and green boots. He is a washing worker. Also, he just graduated from high school, but he doesn’t want to enter university.
'Washing worker' is not idiomatic. Do you mean he is a cleaner? Or a laundry worker?
This is my brother, and he is a Scorpio. He is wearing a purple T-shirt, brown shorts, and green boots. He is a washing worker. Also, he just graduated from high school, but he doesn’t want to enter university.
'Washing worker' is not idiomatic. Do you mean he is a cleaner? Or a laundry worker?
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