"Ensure economic prosperity"
Does this sentence make sense?
I believe that customers should be served at the highest standards, in order to ensure (or provide) their economic advancement, economic prosperity, success.
I had to replace "enable growth and economic prosperity" with synonims and form a sentence (for my cover letter).
"Enable" - "ensure" or "provide"
"Growth and economic prosperity" - "economic advancement", "ec. prosperity", "ec. success". Which one is better? Any better solution?
THANK YOU!
Top answer
I believe that customers should be served at the highest standards, in order to ensure (or provide) their economic advancement, economic prosperity, success. The part after the comma seems a little grandiloquent to me. I suggest simply this.
- I believe that customers should be served at the highest standards, in order to ensure (or provide) their economic advancement, economic prosperity, success.
- The part after the comma seems a little grandiloquent to me.
- I suggest simply this.
- I believe in providing the highest standards of customer service.
- Clive
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I believe that customers should be served at the highest standards, in order to ensure (or provide) their economic advancement, economic prosperity, success.
The part after the comma seems a little grandiloquent to me. I suggest simply this. I believe in providing the highest standards of customer service.
Clive
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