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Dj Bueno Posted 21 years ago

eNJOy yoUrSelf

Take a slice from my soul tart

So that you can see the flowered part

Orchids,daisies among my sweet memories

Can easily make you a bouquet of art.



If you come across a multicoloured lump

Know that it's time to cheer up.

My memories organised you a big party

That will make your heart thump.
  

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The first stanza is very good. You need to work on the second. The meaning is not clear in the second and does not connect to the first.

— Anita_a

  • The first stanza is very good.
  • You need to work on the second.
  • The meaning is not clear in the second and does not connect to the first.
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The first stanza is very good. You need to work on the second. The meaning is not clear in the second and does not connect to the first.
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Well,how about this one Emotion: smile

Take a slice from my soul tart

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