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Question
Do you think some sports are more important than others?Why? Justify your anser
Nowadays, we all know that sports are hugely included in our daily lives, like in our routines and entertainment. Like everything in life, there are some sports that we consider better than others. Because of this, I’ll share the best and the worst sports in my opinion.
Being the worst or the best sport is something very subjective and each person can have a different opinion, but we can differentiate which ones are better either by their presence in the TV, video games or social media.
In spite of the fact that there are a lot of sports, most people when you talk to them about sports will name approximately 20 at most. Along with Football, Basket, Tennis, Baseball and Hockey, they’d name others like Swimming, Volleyball, Boxing and Running. Of these sports, the most followed around the world is football, with his amazing games in all the technological devices, his movies and competitions.
Furthermore, the football matches are so popular primarily because sometimes they become a matter of national pride and patriotism for the citizens of the participating countries.
Hence, in my opinion and with the arguments upside, the best sport is definitely football. On the other hand, the worst sport is more personal, but I'd say cricket. It 's so boring!
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