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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing
English work
Dear Mr Taylor,
I have received your letter asking about my rewarding experience during my gap year in India. I very much appreciate your interest in my social gap year and I would be delighted to recount my great adventure and also exemplify a gap year in your turn. (show you as an exemple how to proceed)
Firstly, it should be made clear that poverty is a relevant issue in India. Although the country is one of the fastest economy in the world, a large part of the population, especially the children complain of hunger and suffer from unsuitability in the society. For the most part, they are even illiterate. Their occuptation come down to work in factories or, worse still, to wander aroung like a lost soul in the streets. Besides some of the miserable children are orphans or disabled. Life in the streets is thus unbearable and intolerable. I came across this regrettable story reading a newspaper seated comfortably on my sofa and I decided to change things, to make a difference, to volunteer.
I have received your letter asking about my rewarding experience during my gap year in India. I very much appreciate your interest in my social gap year and I would be delighted to recount my great adventure and also exemplify a gap year in your turn. (show you as an exemple how to proceed)
Firstly, it should be made clear that poverty is a relevant issue in India. Although the country is one of the fastest economy in the world, a large part of the population, especially the children complain of hunger and suffer from unsuitability in the society. For the most part, they are even illiterate. Their occuptation come down to work in factories or, worse still, to wander aroung like a lost soul in the streets. Besides some of the miserable children are orphans or disabled. Life in the streets is thus unbearable and intolerable. I came across this regrettable story reading a newspaper seated comfortably on my sofa and I decided to change things, to make a difference, to volunteer.
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I find the first paragraph unclear. Can you rewrite it in a simple way?
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Does "English work" mean that you want someone to proofread your text?
Dear Mr Taylor,
I have received your letter asking about my rewarding experience during my gap year in India. I very much appreciate your interest in my social gap year and I would be delighted to recount my great adventure and also exemplify a gap year in your turn. (I don't understand what you mean.)
Dear Mr Taylor,
I have received your letter asking about my rewarding experience during my gap year in India. I very much appreciate your interest in my social gap year and I would be delighted to recount my great adventure and also exemplify a gap year in your turn. (I don't understand what you mean.)
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