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Hello everyone!I have a ready translation, but I can't check the stylistics of the text.  The usage of synonyms, for example. Could somebody help me? The translation isn't very big.Thanks beforehand.

AlpheccaStars · Accepted Answer

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Antoxa · Answer

Here is the text, I hope it isn't too big.
"Most of us don't have the power of subtle vision nor leave our physical body to travel in astral body. But the fact that we don't know something, can't do something or don't understand something doesn't give us reasons to say that it can't be or that it doesn't exist.
The locals call this construction SVE. This dates back to very ancient beliefs. The construction was built 30 thousand years ago by the ancestors of contemporary people.
A construction was discovered during examination of Irgaki Park by an expedition, in Khakassia, South Siberia. Scientists said that they hadn't seen anything similar anywhere in Siberia. This construction is a gate to Shambala.
This is the Kulumis mountain ridge in the Sayanas. The top of the mountain is the heart of the glacier. Because of its flat surface the snow on the top of it accumulated and then moved down slowly along the gentle slopes. From here we can see the aim of our trip -SVE - on the top of the next mountain.
The Khakass word SVE means a fortress. However one can hardly call this construction a fortress. It is definitely a religious object. And as Vladimir Nosov, historian claims it is a place of power and the gate to Shambala.
In theosophy Shambala is considered the place where the Great Teachers stay and contribute to the evolution of humanity. There is an opinion that it is Shambala where the future Messiah will be born and that the northern Shambala is here.
There are a lot of descriptions of how one feels oneself in this place of power. Some people feel intoxicated; others plunge into the atmosphere of goodness, love and peace. Some people see dreams and some get answers.
Besides they say, that here man can get a kind of vaccination enabling one's brain and organism to adapt to conditions of growing Shuman resonance frequencies.
When I was in contact with this place I got a feeling of peace and tranquility. Just the same feelings arise when you come to an old worshipful church."

AlpheccaStars · Answer

Antoxa; I really didn't understand some of this, but made suggestions for better readability.

"Most of us neither ~~don't~~ have the power of subtle(paranormal / extrasensory?) vision nor leave our physical body to travel in an astral body (astral worlds? astral body would be out of the human form. Astral worlds would be some realm in outer space). But the fact that we don't know something, can't do something, or don't understand something, doesn't give us any reasons to say that it can't be or that it doesn't exist.

The locals call this construction SVE. ~~This~~ It dates back to very ancient beliefs. The construction was built 30 thousand years ago by the ancestors of contemporary (modern) people~~. A construction~~ and was discovered during ~~examination~~ the exploration of Irgaki Park by an expedition, (no comma) in Khakassia, South Siberia. Scientists said that they hadn't seen anything similar anywhere else in Siberia. This construction is a gate to Shambala. This (the gate or Shambala?) is the Kulumis mountain ridge in the Sayanas. The top of the mountain is in the heart of the glacier. Because of its flat surface, the snow on ~~the~~ top of it accumulated and then moved down slowly down ~~along~~ the gentle slopes. From here we can see the aim of our trip -SVE - on the top of the next mountain. The Khakass word SVE means a fortress. However one can hardly call this construction a fortress. It is definitely a religious object. And as Vladimir Nosov, the historian, claims, it is a place of power and the gate to Shambala.
In theosophy, Shambala is considered the place where the Great Teachers stay and contribute to the evolution of humanity. There is an opinion that ~~it is~~ Shambala is where the future Messiah will be born and that the northern Shambala is here. There are a lot of descriptions of how one feels ~~oneself~~ in this place of power. Some people feel intoxicated; others plunge into ~~the~~ an atmosphere of goodness, love and peace. Some people see dreams and some get answers. ~~Besides~~ They (who?) say, (no comma) that here man can get a kind of vaccination (injection?) enabling one's brain and body ~~organism~~ to adapt to conditions of the increasing ~~growing~~ Shuman resonance frequencies. When I was in contact with this place I got a feeling of peace and tranquility. Just the same feelings as arise when you come to an old worshipful church.

Antoxa · Answer

AlpheccaStars, thank you muchly! You've saved me.
This text is about religious constructions in Siberia, so it is full of terminology.

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