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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

English Thesis grammer question.

During his life, Willy Loman caused him self and his wife great pain by living a life in which he did not realize what he could and couldn't do and thus causing his children to lose their identity and put their future in danger.


K i am messing up in the tense, this is my thesis of an essay which I am writing right now. Bold area is where i am confused.

Can anyone correct my grammer mistake?

Thank you.
  

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Here's my take: Throughout his life, ***** Loman created great pain for his wife and children by living a life in which he did not realize what he could and couldn't do, and thus caused his children to lose their identity. )

— BarbaraPA

  • Here's my take: Throughout his life, ***** Loman created great pain for his wife and children by living a life in which he did not realize what he could and couldn't do, and thus caused his children to lose their identity.
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Here's my take:

Throughout his life, ***** Loman created great pain for his wife and children by living a life in which he did not realize what he could and couldn't do, and thus caused his children to lose their identity.

(I think saying he threatened their future is a little strong...)
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OH, as we just discussed in the chat room:

What happens when you try to live the American Dream, but you fail? By not realizing what he could and couln't do, ***** Loman caused a great deal of pain to himself, his wife, and his children.
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