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Alc24 Posted 14 years ago
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English speaker ;convoluted sentences please help me correct
Could you please help me correct these sentences please?
1 When carrying it , make sure you computer is facing in/inward when it's in its bag.
2 I've made sure never to drop my phone. That's why it's not broken all these years.
3 People in the subway a sunday morning this early are going home having been out all night most of the time.
4 He changed sides. He used to be a bad guy, but now he's with the good guys.
Thank you
1 When carrying it , make sure you computer is facing in/inward when it's in its bag.
2 I've made sure never to drop my phone. That's why it's not broken all these years.
3 People in the subway a sunday morning this early are going home having been out all night most of the time.
4 He changed sides. He used to be a bad guy, but now he's with the good guys.
Thank you
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I have underlined your problems: 1 When carrying it , make sure you computer is facing in/inward when it's in its bag. 2 I've made sure never to drop my phone. That's why it's not broken all these years.
- I have underlined your problems: 1 When carrying it , make sure you computer is facing in/inward when it's in its bag.
- 2 I've made sure never to drop my phone.
- That's why it's not broken all these years.
- 3 People in the subway a sunday morning this early are going ho me ha ving been out all night most of the time .
- 4 He changed sides.
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I have underlined your problems:
1 When carrying it , make sure you computer is facing in/inward when it's in its bag.
2 I've made sure never to drop my phone. That's why it's not broken all these years.
3 People in the subway a sunday morning this early are going home having been out all night most of the time.
4 He changed sides. He used
1 When carrying it , make sure you computer is facing in/inward when it's in its bag.
2 I've made sure never to drop my phone. That's why it's not broken all these years.
3 People in the subway a sunday morning this early are going home having been out all night most of the time.
4 He changed sides. He used
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1. "While carrying, make sure the computer is facing inward in its bag."
2. "I've made sure never to drop my phone; that's why it hasn't broken all these years."
3. "Most of the time, people on the Subway this early on a Sunday morning are going home having been out all night."
4. "He changed sides. He used to be a bad guy but now he's with the good guys."
Hopefully this help
2. "I've made sure never to drop my phone; that's why it hasn't broken all these years."
3. "Most of the time, people on the Subway this early on a Sunday morning are going home having been out all night."
4. "He changed sides. He used to be a bad guy but now he's with the good guys."
Hopefully this help
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Can you tell me if there is anything redundant or that you would change as tommy pointed out, and could you please tell me what you think the sentence means, if anything?-- You are always asking us 'how to say naturally' something; and all the sentences that I do not correct are natural ways that such things are said. Such sentences are written more concisely and with better style
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