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WANG CHUN Posted 21 years ago
Grammar
English sentences.
Hello.
These sentences are my homework.
I need to translate them from Japanese to English.
Can you help me check them. If you find something worng in them, tell me how to revise them, please. Thank you for your help.
If people dwelling in a country would have not liked doing something they are not very knee on, their country’s situation in every aspect had increasingly deteriorated.
people who are greedy to possess a large fortune take advantage of hiring people specialize in the filed of law about tax.
People would rather choose to alleviate their anxious emotion than recharge their batteries when they wear out energy out of their work
People realize that they should do what they dislike that can contribution to their country’s development.
People should do something that can not give them a lot of enjoyment in term of paying taxes and absorbing knowledge.
These sentences are my homework.
I need to translate them from Japanese to English.
Can you help me check them. If you find something worng in them, tell me how to revise them, please. Thank you for your help.
If people dwelling in a country would have not liked doing something they are not very knee on, their country’s situation in every aspect had increasingly deteriorated.
people who are greedy to possess a large fortune take advantage of hiring people specialize in the filed of law about tax.
People would rather choose to alleviate their anxious emotion than recharge their batteries when they wear out energy out of their work
People realize that they should do what they dislike that can contribution to their country’s development.
People should do something that can not give them a lot of enjoyment in term of paying taxes and absorbing knowledge.
Top answer
I doubt that my renditions are a very literal translation of the Japanese, but they are a lot clearer English. ) Please notice particularly how the sentences have been shortened and the structure made more straightforward : If its citizens are not willing to perform undesirable tasks, a nation will deteriorate. Greedy people hire tax specialists.
- I doubt that my renditions are a very literal translation of the Japanese, but they are a lot clearer English.
- ) Please notice particularly how the sentences have been shortened and the structure made more straightforward : If its citizens are not willing to perform undesirable tasks, a nation will deteriorate.
- Greedy people hire tax specialists.
- Tired workers would rather drown their sorrows than recharge their batteries.
- People need to realize that they must perform unpleasant tasks in order to contribute to their nation's development.
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I doubt that my renditions are a very literal translation of the Japanese, but they are a lot clearer English. (They don't sound like Japanese sentiments to me, in any case.) Please notice particularly how the sentences have been shortened and the structure made more straightforward:
If its citizens are not willing to perform undesirable tasks, a nation will deteriorate.
If its citizens are not willing to perform undesirable tasks, a nation will deteriorate.
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