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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Grammar
English - mediation
Hey guys, I'm from germany and we should do a mediation from german to english in school. I hope anyone can read this and tell me the mistakes:
"Modern Fathers
There are no evidences for rising of the fathers, who are caring devotedly about their children. A high number of males are happy without children. In contrast many women state as main reason for childlessness the fact that they can’t find a suitable partner. Nowadays young dads want to have a close link to their children. This wish of many men is findable in every social class. A significant number of fathers between 25 and 40 years want to support their family not only in a financial way, but they also want to be more co-responsible by rearing their offspring. Besides they want to intensify their relationship to their child. But all in all many male are impeded for lack of time to realize these resolutions. Franz (23) is a good example for a young father. According to his imagination older people haven’t got enough patience for parenting. In his opinion each child needs a male caregiver. He disapproves with men, who leave their children alone."
Thank you. :=)
sincere regards, Jesushippie
"Modern Fathers
There are no evidences for rising of the fathers, who are caring devotedly about their children. A high number of males are happy without children. In contrast many women state as main reason for childlessness the fact that they can’t find a suitable partner. Nowadays young dads want to have a close link to their children. This wish of many men is findable in every social class. A significant number of fathers between 25 and 40 years want to support their family not only in a financial way, but they also want to be more co-responsible by rearing their offspring. Besides they want to intensify their relationship to their child. But all in all many male are impeded for lack of time to realize these resolutions. Franz (23) is a good example for a young father. According to his imagination older people haven’t got enough patience for parenting. In his opinion each child needs a male caregiver. He disapproves with men, who leave their children alone."
Thank you. :=)
sincere regards, Jesushippie
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I have underlined some problem areas. Please try to fix them and post your revised text here. Modern Fathers There are no evidences for rising of the fathers, who are caring devotedly about their children.
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- Modern Fathers There are no evidences for rising of the fathers, who are caring devotedly about their children.
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I have underlined some problem areas. Please try to fix them and post your revised text here.
Modern Fathers
There are no evidences for rising of the fathers, who are caring devotedly about their children. A high number of males are happy without children. In contrast many women state as main reason for childlessness the fact that
Modern Fathers
There are no evidences for rising of the fathers, who are caring devotedly about their children. A high number of males are happy without children. In contrast many women state as main reason for childlessness the fact that
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