Im doing English language and we've been told to so a commentary for a persuasive piece of writing. I have already done one draft and my teacher has basically said I need to completely do it again.
Please can anyone help?
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Did your teacher tell you what was unacceptable about your first draft?
— Fivejedjon
Did your teacher tell you what was unacceptable about your first draft?
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