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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

english igcse

i need some help in writing essays and i am not so good in doing this
  

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Hi, You could start by trying to remember capital letters and punctuation. Would you like to write a paragraph for us to check? Clive

— Clive

  • Hi, You could start by trying to remember capital letters and punctuation.
  • Would you like to write a paragraph for us to check?
  • Clive
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Hi,

You could start by trying to remember capital letters and punctuation.

Would you like to write a paragraph for us to check?

Clive
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OK can i just begin with an introduction to my essay.
here it is
{Nowadays, mobile phones are considered a sort of necessity and it is an inevitable truth that mobile industry is
taking everyone by the storm,from the very basic thing of making calls and sending texts
to the accessing of internet only by a touch of you finger tips.Do you have one of these devices ?}
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The opening sentence, in my opinion, is too vague and too wordy.
What is your thesis?
"sort of necessity" - this does not tell the reader very much.
"Inevitable truth" - It would be much better if you had some statistics to back up your claim, for example, a published study byhttp://www.pe
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