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According to the graph, we can see tremendous differences between the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in person, by letter, and by telephone in one city over a six-month period in 2011.
In the graph, by January, the number of enquiries by three ways has a minor difference. People are likely to enquire by telephone more than in person or by letter or email.
However, in February, the amount of those three closely to be the same. In 4 months later, a rapid change happens. Based on the graph, from March, the number of people who use the telephone and meet in person to enquire increased strongly. The most time we can see the changing between three ways is Jun. By Jun, the two in person and by telephone have been at the top of the graph, while the other one became lower, was left too far from the two.
The change in how people enquire to the Tourist Information Office shows the difference in how people express their opinion and require needs before and then.
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