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Tomer Posted 15 years ago
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English help: Please correct to make it sound better



Hi,

"If you really want to make an effect and get your favourite band to play in your country than make a petition and show your local promotors that there is demand"

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Hi,
"If you really want to make an effect and get your favourite band to play in your country than make a petition and show your local promotors that there is demand"

"If you really want to make an effort to get your favourite band to play in your country, then start a petition to show your local promo

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