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Jeong Theresa Posted 11 years ago
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english grammar revise

Catherine has a new friend named Kristi who lives in her next door. Kristi saw that what Catherine has drawn. Catherine has drawn Jason. Every day Catherine goes to Jason’s house and plays with him. Jason couldn’t talk, so Catherine and Jason played with letters. Jason likes to play with Catherine

can you correct this paragraph please???
  

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Hello, Jeong Theresa—and welcome to English Forums. Thank you for registering as a member. Jeong Theresa can you correct this paragraph please?

  • Hello, Jeong Theresa—and welcome to English Forums.
  • Thank you for registering as a member.
  • Jeong Theresa can you correct this paragraph please?
  • Sure: Catherine has a new friend named Kristi who lives next door.
  • Kristi saw what Catherine had drawn—a picture of Jason.
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Hello, Jeong Theresa—and welcome to English Forums. Thank you for registering as a member.
Jeong Theresacan you correct this paragraph please?
Sure:

Catherine has a new friend named Kristi who lives next door. Kristi saw what Catherine had drawn—a picture of Jason. Every day Catherine goes to Jason’s house and plays with him. He likes to play with h
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ohhh!! thank you soooo much^^!!
what abt if i write 'Kristi saw what Catherine has drawn'...is this would be wrong to write??
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Jeong Theresawhat abt if i write 'Kristi saw what Catherine has drawn'...is this would be wrong to write??
Yes, it is wrong: the drawing happened before the seeing.

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