English Grammar / Cover letter

Hello,

I am writing a cover letter to a company and I want to tell them why I am interested in working for them. So I check their website and I want to paraphrase some of their facts.

"Unilever is one of the world’s leading suppliers of fast moving consumer goods with strong operations in more than 100 countries and sales in 180. With products that are used over two billion times a day around the world, we work to create a better future every day and help people feel good, look good and get more out of life with brands and services that are good for them and good for others."

I am attracted to Unilever because of their great reputation as one of the world's leader in consumer goods with a strong dedication to improve the lives of consumers, their community and the world as a whole.

I think there might be some grammatical errors in this sentence. Do you think I could have paraphrase the sentence better.

Thank you very much for your help.