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Japanlluvr Posted 12 years ago
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Can someone please check my grammar?

The types of insurance considered for our business include the General Liability insurance that covers the legal aspect of the business. Such as carrying both defence and damages in injury claims and property claims. With the atelier studio rented in (place name), Property Insurance will be considered to protect from potential damaging and loss of the premises, computers, merchandise from fire, vandalism, theft, smoke damage. As the goods will be delivered directly to our wholesalers, either online or local boutiques, as well as to our customers from online orders, Goods in transit insurance covers against the theft, loss or damaged of goods during transit. This will come to a total estimation of $1500 worth of insurance cost per annual.
  

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I have taken the liberty of rewriting your paragraph. If you need it to be closer to your original, let me know and I'll try again. The types of insurance necessary for our business include General Liability insurance, Property insurance, and Goods in Transit insurance.

  • I have taken the liberty of rewriting your paragraph.
  • If you need it to be closer to your original, let me know and I'll try again.
  • The types of insurance necessary for our business include General Liability insurance, Property insurance, and Goods in Transit insurance.
  • General Liability insurance will cover potential legal expenses of the business, including legal fees and damages.
  • Property insurance will cover the atelier rented in (place name) against damage to, or loss of, the premises, computers, and merchandise due to fire and smoke, theft, or vandalism.
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I have taken the liberty of rewriting your paragraph. If you need it to be closer to your original, let me know and I'll try again.

The types of insurance necessary for our business include General Liability insurance, Property insurance, and Goods in Transit insurance.
General Liability insurance will cover potential legal expenses of the business, including legal fees and

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