English Grammar
"I wish to congratulate the entire university on their 12th convocation ceremony where a hundred and eighty-eight graduates emerged with First Class Honours in their undergraduate programmes and also for topping the list of the Nigerian universities with the Most Employable Graduates, as published in the 2016 edition of the Nigerian Graduate Report."
is this statement grammatically correct? I feel there should be a 'comma' somewhere between "undergraduate programmes and also for" in line 3.
Thank you.
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It needs tightening: I wish to congratulate the university on its 12th convocation ceremony, in which 188 graduates have received first class honours, and also for its topping the list of Nigerian universities with the most employable graduates, as published in the Nigerian Graduate Report 2016.
- It needs tightening: I wish to congratulate the university on its 12th convocation ceremony, in which 188 graduates have received first class honours, and also for its topping the list of Nigerian universities with the most employable graduates, as published in the Nigerian Graduate Report 2016.
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It needs tightening:
I wish to congratulate the university on its 12th convocation ceremony, in which 188 graduates have received first class honours, and also for its topping the list of Nigerian universities with the most employable graduates, as published in the Nigerian Graduate Report 2016.
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