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BrianMendonsa Posted 10 years ago
Grammar
English Grammar
Hi please tell me if these sentences are OK. The environment has become an increasing political concern due to the rapid industrialization or the world in the 1960's. These effects have crossed national borders. Thus strong laws were required to protect the environment.
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A few comments. "or" is a typo for "of". I recommend no apostrophe in "1960s".
- A few comments.
- "or" is a typo for "of".
- I recommend no apostrophe in "1960s".
- "These effects" has no clear referent.
- The tenses "has become ...
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A few comments.
"or" is a typo for "of".
I recommend no apostrophe in "1960s".
"These effects" has no clear referent.
The tenses "has become ... were required" do not seem well aligned.
According to traditional rules, "due to" is used incorrectly, but most people no longer care about this rule.
Whether "rapid industrialization of the world" can
"or" is a typo for "of".
I recommend no apostrophe in "1960s".
"These effects" has no clear referent.
The tenses "has become ... were required" do not seem well aligned.
According to traditional rules, "due to" is used incorrectly, but most people no longer care about this rule.
Whether "rapid industrialization of the world" can
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GPYA few comments."or" is a typo for "of".I recommend no apostrophe in "1960s"."These effects" has no clear referent.The tenses "has become ... were required" do not seem well aligned.According to traditional rules, "due to" is used incorrectly, but most people no longer care about this rule.Whether "rapid industrialization of the world" can be pinned down to the 1960s se
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