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English essay - Why i was late. Need feedback
Why I was late for English class
Once upon a time, a very vice old man said that action leads to other chosen actions. This means that once the actions has started, they're going to continue forever, and nobody can never stop this flow of actions. If we chose to believe the vice man, we've got to conclude that the actions somehow, somewhere and some time started, and from that point just flowed. Actions lead to other actions, and history was made. The dominobricks were falling. We've also got to conclude that whatever we do has no influence on the bricks, because the bricks were set up that way. Some would call this destiny. This leads me to, that I then have no influence on happenings. The bricks are just falling. The way they're were sat up, by some kind of overlord. I might sound very religious, but I think it makes perfect sense. This also means that me being late for English class was part of the overlords plan. The plan we are all a part of. You assigning me this essay was also a part of the plan. If we knew what kind of action a specific action led to, we would actually be able to know the future. Sometimes we know what actions lead to, e.g. we know that low pressure often leads to cloudy weather, but we cannot be sure.
If we chose not to believe the vice man, I have absolutely no excuse.
Although we should - he was very vice.
AJW
Once upon a time, a very vice old man said that action leads to other chosen actions. This means that once the actions has started, they're going to continue forever, and nobody can never stop this flow of actions. If we chose to believe the vice man, we've got to conclude that the actions somehow, somewhere and some time started, and from that point just flowed. Actions lead to other actions, and history was made. The dominobricks were falling. We've also got to conclude that whatever we do has no influence on the bricks, because the bricks were set up that way. Some would call this destiny. This leads me to, that I then have no influence on happenings. The bricks are just falling. The way they're were sat up, by some kind of overlord. I might sound very religious, but I think it makes perfect sense. This also means that me being late for English class was part of the overlords plan. The plan we are all a part of. You assigning me this essay was also a part of the plan. If we knew what kind of action a specific action led to, we would actually be able to know the future. Sometimes we know what actions lead to, e.g. we know that low pressure often leads to cloudy weather, but we cannot be sure.
If we chose not to believe the vice man, I have absolutely no excuse.
Although we should - he was very vice.
AJW
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I have underlined some problem areas: Why I was late for English class Once upon a time, a very vice old man said that action leads to other chosen actions. This means that once the actions has started, they're going to continue forever, and nobody can never stop this flow of actions. If we chose to believe the vice man, we've got to conclude that the actions somehow, somewhere and some time started, and from that point just flowed.
- I have underlined some problem areas: Why I was late for English class Once upon a time, a very vice old man said that action leads to other chosen actions.
- This means that once the actions has started, they're going to continue forever, and nobody can never stop this flow of actions.
- If we chose to believe the vice man, we've got to conclude that the actions somehow, somewhere and some time started, and from that point just flowed.
- Actions lead to other actions, and history was made.
- The dominobricks were falling.
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I have underlined some problem areas:
Why I was late for English class
Once upon a time, a very vice old man said that action leads to other chosen actions. This means that once the actions has started, they're going to continue forever, and nobody can never stop this flow of actions. If we chose to believe the vice man, we've got to con
Why I was late for English class
Once upon a time, a very vice old man said that action leads to other chosen actions. This means that once the actions has started, they're going to continue forever, and nobody can never stop this flow of actions. If we chose to believe the vice man, we've got to con
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