English essay - about 200 words, can you check it?

Shopping centers are very popular nowadays. They seem to be a beloved place for some teenagers to meet, to entertain and to spend free time - as well as money. Colorful clothes, famous brands, well known coffeehouses and all this in one place - this is what draws attention of young people.

If it comes to visiting shopping malls in order to buy something, to me shopping online appears to be a better option. Within a few clicks you can easily find a specific item in the best price. If you are not entirely sure if you'll like it, you always have the right to make a return or the possibility to go to the shop and ask the sales assistant to show you the exact thing - both will save your time.

Since there are not only shops in the shopping centers, for some teenagers it's just a nice place to take their time out and have a coffee. To my mind there are many other places that might attract young people and are more worth spending time in.

It is fine to hang out in a shopping mall once in a while, yet there are plenty of other cool things to do instead of buying some new clothes or another fancy coffee.

I will later add something to the end, is the whole text ok?