English essay

IS IT NECESSARY TO HAVE SO LONG WINTER HOLIDAY OR NOT?

The newest statistic shows that holiday very necessary for adult students. I agree with this statement.
First of all in winter holiday there are a lot of celebrations. It takes about a week thus we need to have other week for our rest or jobs we had to do. It is good for graduated class because they can prepare for their credits.
Secondly, in winter holiday you can meet your friends, who you have no seen for a long time, go somewhere at longer trip than two days. You do not have worry about tomorrow and difficulties that you have in normal schedule. More over you can clean all your home and discard all not necessary things.
Thirdly, in so long winter holiday you can do nothing serious or important just to watch television, sleep a lot or something else. Although it would be much better if you read a few books because it is broaden your minds.
To sum up so long winter holiday is good if you make yourself for studding and do not let you get lazy. In my opinion, everyone should have a little time of rest or holiday to do whatever they want.

Vilija.

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