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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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does this make sense: . Someone being distracted while listening to their iPod or talking on their phone may not realize that danger is near them, this could happen at a very inopportune time and be life threatening.
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Too many redundancies. Someone distracted by their iPod or cell phone may not realize that danger is near.
- Too many redundancies.
- Someone distracted by their iPod or cell phone may not realize that danger is near.
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Too many redundancies.
Someone distracted by their iPod or cell phone may not realize that danger is near.
Someone distracted by their iPod or cell phone may not realize that danger is near.
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