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Anonymous Posted 21 years ago
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English Club Favor

Hey Guys (in particular English students),

I am an ESL teacher in Brazil, and am creating a site for my English students. However, I want it to be something beneficial to billions of other English students around the world as well.

Would you be so kind to take a look at my English Club website and tell me what I can add to it to make it better and more interesting for you.

Thanks in advance,

Your Friend From Brazil,

David A. Bailey, Jr
  

Top answer

1-- capitalize English . 2-- guarantee is spelled so. 3-- You need to proofread the site.

  • 1-- capitalize English .
  • 2-- guarantee is spelled so.
  • 3-- You need to proofread the site.
  • Overall, your site is very slick and professional looking, but the text is rather empty-- the large amount of introductory reading required produces little real information.
  • Your introductory speeches are too verbose, and for me the casual style borders on cavalierism.
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1-- capitalize English.
2-- guarantee is spelled so.
3-- You need to proofread the site.

Overall, your site is very slick and professional looking, but the text is rather empty-- the large amount of introductory reading required produces little real information. Your introductory speeches are too verbose, and for me the casual style borders on cavalierism

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