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Anonymous Posted 21 years ago
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English Club Favor
Hey Guys (in particular English students),
I am an ESL teacher in Brazil, and am creating a site for my English students. However, I want it to be something beneficial to billions of other English students around the world as well.
Would you be so kind to take a look at my English Club website and tell me what I can add to it to make it better and more interesting for you.
Thanks in advance,
Your Friend From Brazil,
David A. Bailey, Jr
I am an ESL teacher in Brazil, and am creating a site for my English students. However, I want it to be something beneficial to billions of other English students around the world as well.
Would you be so kind to take a look at my English Club website and tell me what I can add to it to make it better and more interesting for you.
Thanks in advance,
Your Friend From Brazil,
David A. Bailey, Jr
Top answer
1-- capitalize English . 2-- guarantee is spelled so. 3-- You need to proofread the site.
- 1-- capitalize English .
- 2-- guarantee is spelled so.
- 3-- You need to proofread the site.
- Overall, your site is very slick and professional looking, but the text is rather empty-- the large amount of introductory reading required produces little real information.
- Your introductory speeches are too verbose, and for me the casual style borders on cavalierism.
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1-- capitalize English.
2-- guarantee is spelled so.
3-- You need to proofread the site.
Overall, your site is very slick and professional looking, but the text is rather empty-- the large amount of introductory reading required produces little real information. Your introductory speeches are too verbose, and for me the casual style borders on cavalierism
2-- guarantee is spelled so.
3-- You need to proofread the site.
Overall, your site is very slick and professional looking, but the text is rather empty-- the large amount of introductory reading required produces little real information. Your introductory speeches are too verbose, and for me the casual style borders on cavalierism
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