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You said that I have to discuss both view and give my own opinion. I don't understand. I have discussed both advantages and disadvantages, give my opinion that I think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages in the introduction and conclusion. So I not sure what you said?

Teechr · Accepted Answer

Minh AnYou said that I have to discuss both view and give my own opinion.

No, I didn't say that. I said that one possibility was that the question might include that. Anyway, not to worry.

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Today, social media platforms ~~bring a lot of benefits to life, including~~ such as Facebook and Twitter have become very popular with users all over the world. Young people, especially, are fond of ~~get used to~~ scrolling through those social application sites. However, some argue that these online platforms do more harm than good, particularly when it comes to social interaction. I believe that will bring ~~less~~ fewer advantages than disadvantages for people.

On the one hand, there are some benefits ~~of using~~ associated with social media sites. Firstly, almost all ~~social media sites~~ can bring people together with ease and convenience. Communicating with relatives is ~~convenient and~~ fast, easy, and free when we use social media to connect. For instance, if we want to talk with ~~your foreign~~ friends overseas, ~~you~~ we can video call them on any one of many social networks. Also, we can interact with people by commenting on their posts.

~~Secondly,~~ Nevertheless, social media platforms are also associated with some drawbacks. ~~can be seen in using social networks.~~ First, they can be addictive. If you use social media too much, you will ~~reduce self-discipline~~ be distracted and not focus on work or study tasks. ~~ing.~~ Moreover, it is a well-documented phenomenon that online social media ~~It leads to creating~~ promote distance between people, even between family members. It is not uncommon at all nowadays to see several people, even family members or friends, sitting in the same room, each typing away on their smartphone, tablet, or laptop, and no one talking.

In conclusion, although social media facilitate online virtual communication and enable people separated by great geographical distances to stay in tough with each other, they can also hinder real social interaction and reduce real personal communication. ~~has some positive aspects for life. I personally believe that advantages of using social network~~

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