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Anonymous Posted 7 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

English

It is strongly controversial that IT is playing an indispensable functions in education and will repalce tradditional role for teacher one day. While i accept advantages of using computer, i certainly believe that teachers are irreplaceable for the following reasons.To begin with, cutting-adge technology is able to educate as a whole, but it is inevitable to have many limitaions and restrictions. Firstly, computers are only mechanisms and are not able to indicate their emotion. For a clear example, robots can not impart knowledge about psychology and affection to students as real teachers can do. Secondly, computers find it difficult to ensure good classroom management. This might be particurlarly true by the fact that the are only set up to train the children while there are many unpredictable soulutions in classes and purely machines can not be compared to huamn’s intelligence and flexibility. For instance, many unruly students are willing to display unacceptable behaviors. Futhermore, teaching constantly are likely to be infinitely motonous. In addition, installing the computer system is prohibitively expensive for many hard regions because of its reponses. In may underpriviledged countries like Africa, for instance, illiterate rate is the chief culprit for a poverty-stricken economic and it is impossible to use modern technology as an effectively educational method. Beside, local goverment need to allocate this amount of money on feasible solutions like improving school’s infrastructure and teacher’s qualification.In conclusion, from all of disadvanteges considered above, i strongly agree that teachers always play an unreplaceable role in education.
  

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You need to organize this essay into paragraphs. Have you learned yet how to do this? No one wants to read an essay in the form of just one huge paragraph.

  • You need to organize this essay into paragraphs.
  • Have you learned yet how to do this?
  • No one wants to read an essay in the form of just one huge paragraph.
  • It makes people think that you do not have an organized mind!
  • The pronoun I is always written as a capital.
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You need to organize this essay into paragraphs. Have you learned yet how to do this?

No one wants to read an essay in the form of just one huge paragraph. It makes people think that you do not have an organized mind!

The pronoun I is always written as a capital.

Please begin by writing as a title the topic or prompt that your essay is about.

Clive

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Anon;

Is this your essay? If so, then please post in the essay forum:

And register with a username to get essay help. It takes a lot of time to consider an essay.

Include the instructions for your writing assignment.

"English?" is not a good question. The answer is, yes, that looks like English.

Subject: Please review my essay

Message body:
Topic:

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anonymous, i certainly believe
anonymousi strongly agree

"i" is the ninth letter of the alphabet.
Letters don't believe anything, not do they agree with anything.

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