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Erika Starrr Posted 7 years ago
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How do you explain the difference in meaning between a) The drug affects the cerebral cortex which is stimulating sensors responsible for fear and a person's reactions to it.

b)The drug affects the cerebral cortex, which is stimulating sensors which are responsible for fear and a person's reactions to it.

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Erika Starrr Please email me. We answer in the forum. Neither one is very good.

  • Erika Starrr Please email me.
  • We answer in the forum.
  • Neither one is very good.
  • It does not make sense to try to give differences between poorly written sentences.
  • The drug affects the cerebral cortex, which controls the fight-or-flight response.
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Erika StarrrPlease email me.

We answer in the forum.

Neither one is very good. It does not make sense to try to give differences between poorly written sentences.

The drug affects the cerebral cortex, which controls the fight-or-flight response. is stimulating sensors responsible for fear and a pe

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I think you want this:

The drug affects the cerebral cortex by stimulating sensors which are responsible for fear and a person's reactions to it.

CJ

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