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Trinh Lê Posted 7 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

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It was midnight, after reviewing the exam tomorrow, I went to bed. In my sleepping, I dreamed of a terrible story. I found myself going to another world, this place was all black. I saw many people wearing long black dresses and holding a sharp stick, fierce face, and blood stains. My heart is pounding, a crowd comes behind me. Suddenly, I shouted, they quickly grabbed me and let me into a trunk. I was taken to a darker place. It was horrible, the sound was chaotic with screams, crying, screaming. each one was cut to pieces, blood flowed, and then put into a pot of boiling water. "Oh, no!" I shouted. I suddenly get up, my heart was pounding, it turned out to be a dream, and I looked at the clock now at 3:00 am. I was nervous, scared, sweaty. Finally, I didn't sleep until the next morning.

  

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Learn not to make comma splice errors. You make a lot of them. It was midnight, and after reviewing for the exam tomorrow, I went to bed.

  • Learn not to make comma splice errors.
  • You make a lot of them.
  • It was midnight, and after reviewing for the exam tomorrow, I went to bed.
  • In my sleepping , (wrong form, wrong spelling) I had a nightmare.
  • dreamed of a terrible story .
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Learn not to make comma splice errors. You make a lot of them.



It was midnight, and after reviewing for the exam tomorrow, I went to bed. In my sleepping

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