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Lua nguyen Posted 7 years ago
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How are you? I have just had a two week holiday in Australia. I would like to tell you something about my trip. I was very happy that I visited Melbourne- Australia with my parents. We flew to Melbourne and stayed in a hotel in the center of Melbourne.

In Melbourne, we visited a lot of interesting places: museum, Vitoria square, Foot scray market. The view of Melbourne was fantastic and romantic. But the most exciting for me was visiting Philip island. I could see a lot of penguin there. Food in Melbourne was quite good. I especially felt excited with the Chinese food when we visited China town in Australia.

Australian people are very friendly and warm. So, my parents and I felt very comfortable and like at home. Well, I told you everything about my holiday. What places do you want to visit on your next time? Why?

Thank you for checking my writing.

  

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How are you? I have just had a two week holiday in Australia. I would like to tell you something about my trip. I was very happy that I visited Melbourne- Australia with my parents. We flew to Melbourne and stayed in a hotel in the center of Melbourne.

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