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Anonymous Posted 9 years ago
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is anything wrong with this sentence "One recent sweltering afternoon,a friend and I trekked to a new public pool,armed with books,sunglasses and icy drinks, planning to beat the heat with a swim.

  

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anonymous I s anything wrong with this sentence ? You need punctuation, as shown. anonymous One recent sweltering afternoon,a friend and I trekked to a new public pool,armed with books,sunglasses , and icy drinks, planning to beat the heat with a swim.

— CalifJim

  • anonymous I s anything wrong with this sentence ?
  • You need punctuation, as shown.
  • anonymous One recent sweltering afternoon,a friend and I trekked to a new public pool,armed with books,sunglasses , and icy drinks, planning to beat the heat with a swim.
  • The only glaring problem is the lack of a space after each comma.
  • It's book s, s unglasses ; not book s,s unglasses .
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anonymousIs anything wrong with this sentence?

You need punctuation, as shown.

anonymousOne recent sweltering afternoon,a friend and I trekked to a new public pool,armed with books,sunglasses, and icy d
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