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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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Hi,
Can you check/correct my sentences, please?

I have to say that I Iike the kids´centre in New York more and it has remained in my heart. If you can offer me the teacher´s job there I would be thankful. I´m ready to work with 5-6 year olds.

Thank you for your help!
  

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Anonymous I have to say that I Iike the kids´centre in New York more and it has remained in my heart. If you can offer me the teacher´s job there I would be thankful. I´m ready to work with 5-6 year olds.

— CalifJim

  • Anonymous I have to say that I Iike the kids´centre in New York more and it has remained in my heart.
  • If you can offer me the teacher´s job there I would be thankful.
  • I´m ready to work with 5-6 year olds.
  • I don't understand why you used "more".
  • You like it more than what?
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AnonymousI have to say that I Iike the kids´centre in New York more and it has remained in my heart. If you can offer me the teacher´s job there I would be thankful. I´m ready to work with 5-6 year olds.
I don't understand why you used "more". You like it more than what? I'd leave it out. You also need a comma before "and" and after "there", like this:
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Hello,
I would write is as follow;

I have to say that I Iike the kids´center in New York more and it has remained in my heart. I would be grateful if you could me offer me teaching position there. I´m looking forward to working with 5-6 year olds.

Hamid
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hrsaneiif you could me offer me a teaching position
Too many mes, and you need a.
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Hi,
Thank you for your help!

I used "more" because I visited two kids´ centres yesterday.
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AnonymousI used "more" because I visited two kids´ centres yesterday.
OK. And the people you're writing to know that? If so, then OK. Leave in "more" if you want.

CJ
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But maybe there is a more polite way to write the first sentence?

Does it sound better?:

I have to say that the kids´ centre in New York remained in my heart and I would really like to work there.
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AnonymousI have to say that the kids´ centre in New York remained in my heart, and I would really like to work there.
Also OK. Not any difference in politeness. Not to my ear anyway.

(Since you're writing to someone in New York, you may as well use American spelling and write "center" instead of "centre", which is
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