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New Hope Posted 12 years ago
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Is the last sentence in the passage below grammatically correct? Please rewrite it to make it look good to read.
Fatima was watching television with her family when her father's eyes fell on her fingernails. They were long and dirty. He did not feel good about it.
Fatima was watching television with her family when her father's eyes fell on her fingernails. They were long and dirty. He did not feel good about it.
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Fatima was watching television with her family when her father's eyes fell upon her fingernails. They were long and dirty, and they displeased him.
- Fatima was watching television with her family when her father's eyes fell upon her fingernails.
- They were long and dirty, and they displeased him.
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Fatima was watching television with her family when her father's eyes fell upon her fingernails. They were long and dirty, and they displeased him.
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