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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

English

my brother is sixteen years old,i didn't expect him to be as scared as i was,but he was even more scared.i opened the door and my brother walked in first what can you see i asked its just dark my brother said if we can just find the lights said my brother how can you find the switches for lights in the room we didnt even build i said now you sound like the goat i said. i heard the sound of wind and i felt some breeze i felt really cold,my legs were shaking and i almost wet my pants.
  

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Hi, You need to use a capital letter at the start of each sentence, and correct punctuation at the end of each sentence. The pronoun I is always a capital. If you will make those improvements, I'd be happy to offer you more help.

  • Hi, You need to use a capital letter at the start of each sentence, and correct punctuation at the end of each sentence.
  • The pronoun I is always a capital.
  • If you will make those improvements, I'd be happy to offer you more help.
  • Clive
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Hi,

You need to use a capital letter at the start of each sentence, and correct punctuation at the end of each sentence.
The pronoun I is always a capital.

If you will make those improvements, I'd be happy to offer you more help.

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